Slim-Bean's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FVV No.1]

Nicely done

I only marked it down for the issues with the sound. The song cut out all the way through for me leaving me with tons of movie with no music.

I believe you can fix this by changing the sync options in the properties table to "Stream"
Let me know when you fix the issue, as I would love to see it all the way through.

[Sunset 2 Sunrise]

You've definately got something...

You made everything work in sync with the music, which to me is an amzing achievment. I think its got something, though it would be a lot better if you cut down on some of the "scenes" (IE the long walks everywhere). The sound of the feet also got a bit annoying after a while

If you add or change anything to this do let me know, I'd love to see it!

TranceCreations responds:

Thank you---
Sure thing, I will most definitely make the adjustments.

My instructor made it a requirement for the project to be at least 3 min long and at 12 frames per second. That is why I had the long walk scenes.

[The Octahedron]

Fantastic!

I loved it! I was quite long, some of the events could be cut, but to be honest Im glad you didnt. You could have worked a little on the repetitive parts, but all in all everything seemed to work together.

I don't know if "Karma" (What goes around comes around) was your message, but it spoke volumes, I thought the ending was very well done as well.

Nice Work!

[Cocoa And Pumpkin]

Ummm...

half the time I had no idea what was going on. By the time any story started to develop I could see quite a few bugs. (The frames would skip or jump back randomly)

It has a bit of potential, but it does need quite a bit of work.

Hang in there!

[Zionic Eclipse]

Love It!

I was just listening to "The Unfilled Void" and pictured pretty much what you have gone and made. For some reason the sounds remind me of th game Freelancer, Is this just me?

3D is where I really want to go in flash, so kudos for somthing this smooth. Seriously its incredible.

As said before I think there should be some more dialogue, possibly another pilot that Jacob can communicate with.

Again nice Job, Keep it up.

["IF"]

Fantastic

I love it, one of my favourite animations. Its got so much depth!

So well animated as well, the shooting seemed so real.

Keep up the good work mate!